if self-consciousness is the curse of the city
then humility is found in the hamlet across wooden tables and red and white checkers
in the eyes of a man i've forgotten to see
for the child who runs between...
his reflection, the light that hones me, moans me mercy to the nature of love
and we buy sandwiches and sip water and remember what it's like to date
awkward hand-holding in the back of the diner where a draft blows through streaked windows
it's our
hiding place
and the waitress cracks jokes and we crack laughter, hoarse
there's art on the walls and we pretend it's a gallery and read off the titles and remark on the symbolism all the while
having eyes only for the other
i find him handsome,
he finds me pretty,
and we say so around a bite of fries
and we're tired but we don't want to stop dating so we go bowling and the balls bounce funny and the townsfolk make fun of this gangly couple and i want to tell them, we made the most beautiful boy
but it doesn't matter, because we know
and our balls gutter and our hands flutter and we find love
in a diner
and its
plastic red tablecloth
shared with one shot poetry
44 comments:
um,
this is a familiar story.
then ,
and sometimes now.
(okay , I have to admit, I don't really eat diner food, we can substitute little greek diner maybe? :) )
ah...you are speking to the romantic in me...love little places like that...though they are few and far between...and i got to say i think more love is found there than in the busy hustle bustle restaurants....sweet post!
:) nice
love this. especially, "i want to tell them we made the most beautiful baby boy..."
i'm adding you to my followed list- looking forward to you popping up on my google reader :)
keep dating..even when your tired and the handsome and pretty are decades older
This warms my heart....what a blessing! :-)
Beautiful, Emily. Your story, your baby, you. Blessings to you. :)
That was really cool.
I love how you love him, how you hold him with your words like you hold him in your arms, like he is the gift and you have received more than you will ever be able to tell us. Bless you.
I love the stories you weave and the way you weave them. Never am I disappointed when I come and read you. Love and Light, Sender
LOVE the love all the way through and down this great blog
Nice ahring... greta one shot
;)
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oh girl i adore this. so sweet and romantic and true. just perfect.
This is so sweet Em - and so essential. Life really can get so busy and overwhelming we don't even really see one another. Time with the one we love can transform the most humble of places into a romantic paradise :-)
Nice story well told in in an unprosiac way
How romantic and real, not flowery and obscure, but touching on the moments shared that make love so deep.
Lovely poem.
blissful, this...
i feel a little voyeuristic, peeking with the drafts
through streaked windows...
as you make life love.
I love each part of this, but especially how it serves as a reminder of what I must not lose, what I must recapture. Blessings to you.
don't ever stop.
keep 'seeing' each other ...
Sweet,just sweet!Soemtimes familiarity can take out the fun.But recalling moments and visiting old places helps rekindle the love ,again.
Really lovely one shot!
Well I almost had dinner with you and your family Emily.. I enjoyed it. I was having dinner one night in Pune, near OSHO Ashram and this one reminds of me the same... Liked it so much...
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Always love your "shot" of poetry...you are one of those writers that leave me wanting to write poetry because it expresses so much more than just the regular 'ol sentence.
So love how you wrap the words in and among feelings and moments and possibilities.
Your honesty about life and the continuation of love has helped me open up.
Thank you, dear Emily. :)
beautiful and so romantic...sigh..think i should suggest hubby a date evening as well..haven't had one in a long time..
Another lovely love story...love the setting :)
*sigh* Isn't it wonderful that we can find one another again and again... in the most every day places. Loved this.
I feel richer now that I've read this, it's like a meal of words. Lovely.
I feel richer now that I've read this, it's like a meal of words. Lovely.
sounds like a lovely, if not perfect, date.
Beautiful, realism to hearts & dating...great writing :) ~April
May God continue to bless your fluttering hearts!
May God continue to bless your fluttering hearts!
Gorgeous words and heartfelt sentiments. Makes me want to go on a date with hubs tonight. Alas, sitters aren't as spontaneous.
Hi - As usual I fall right into your pieces. Your work has such integrity detailing small things with such rich meaning. I love reading it. Thank you, Gay @beachanny
lovelovelove!!!!
my mama used to tell me that this dating stuff is critical to marriage... as they would dress in snowmobile suits and walk alone in the snow, no matter how much we begged to go. "this is out date!". they could afford no more. but it was enough.
they celebrate 48 years this may. :)
I keep finding that the best things in life end in liturgy. Just lovely, Em.
Aaaah so beautiful. So vivid. The images are right there. I love how you show real love and real life, nothing hollywood or dreamed. It's tangible, it's joy in the little things, it's moments. Awesome.
Did you enter the One Shot Poetry contest?
Ah! Some places have a historic significance to each one of us. No matter however insignificant to the others!
Love can come anytime, anywhere, and in the least expected places at times. That is why we have to accept and and enjoy anything that comes into our lives.
Emily my dear you should turn this post into the lyrics of a song accompanied by soft rambling guitar. Just beautiful.
this is such a beautiful write - romantic in a comfortably unhurried, fit between the pages of everyday, sort of way, a sense of love running through and through to foreverness...
and it doesn't matter, because we know...
and most the time, that's all that matters.
every week you bring us such wonderful words...again a beautiful write and share cheers pete
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Happy Belated Halloween to you. Our potluck is open, welcome linking,
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Cheers!
You rock!
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